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Let's get one thing straight. I an a TOTAL n00b at digital coloring. And coloring in general...

I'd love for someone to tell me what I did well, as well as what I didn't do so good.

Again, Sarai and her Staff, Liberator.
Liberator says hi.

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:iconmayumayu13:
yay!!! culurzsss!!!!
hhhhm, the wrinkles in the fabrics of her clothing doesn't look look like they fall naturally.
but on the other hand, i like the texture on the staff and the hair (how did you pull that off? i tried it before and failed)

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True meaning of FTW: Fuck The World
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Her hair and the staff is great! I'll suggest you to shade more, though, on her clothes and her skin. Experiment with shadows and highlights :aww:

But good work with the combination of fresh colors! Also, I want her mask, it's cool :D

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I looked up at the tallest building
Felt it falling down
I could feel my balance shifting
Everything was moving around
These streets so fixed and solid
A shimmering haze
And everything that I relied on disappeared
:iconethelle:
Hi Liberator. :XD:

You did good on the hair and on the staff, and on the scarf/mask thingy around her neck/face. As mayu said before me, the folds in her dress look a bit weird, but I have no idea how to make them better of how I would have done them, so just ignore that comment. The cloak looks good!

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"Mr. B, where's the milk of human kindness?"
"It's gone off, Baldrick. It stinks."
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Thank you for the criticizm and compliments. I'll work with the folds in her clothes and stuff for next time!
And the texture? For the staff, I just made diagonal lines in 3 tones and smudged them. The same for the hair, I think, just... not diagonal.

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When all the world
comes to an end,
I swear I'll still be
standing.
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I is a blob now!
:iconnecromancer-staff:
Thankoo!
Gots it! Shade more.
:hug:

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When all the world
comes to an end,
I swear I'll still be
standing.
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Icon by ~TOXiC-ToOtHpAsTe
I is a blob now!
:iconnecromancer-staff:
Thank you. :hug: I'll try and do better with the dress, though I'm not QUITE sure how. I'll work at it. :D

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When all the world
comes to an end,
I swear I'll still be
standing.
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Icon by ~TOXiC-ToOtHpAsTe
I is a blob now!
:iconmayumayu13:
ooooh.
i knew that.
i tried that once, but it didn't pull off all that well for me.

--
  /l ...WHAT?
゙(゚、 。 7 I have problems???
 l、゙ , ヽ Why didn't anyone tell me this???
 しし| ,_)ノ
True meaning of FTW: Fuck The World
:iconnecromancer-staff:
My mom showed me how to properly use the smudge tool!

--
When all the world
comes to an end,
I swear I'll still be
standing.
-----
Icon by ~TOXiC-ToOtHpAsTe
I is a blob now!
:iconmayumayu13:
really? how?

--
  /l ...WHAT?
゙(゚、 。 7 I have problems???
 l、゙ , ヽ Why didn't anyone tell me this???
 しし| ,_)ノ
True meaning of FTW: Fuck The World

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